ESL Writing 3

A man’s revenge
“When women revenge, there will be immeasurable disasters. Women are considered as poisonous snakes, they are ready biting their opponents until they die”, some old people said. I was really shock. I thought that criticism was evil and unfair. And, I wondered how men revenge when their hatred flame burn.
I had a friend, Dung. I accidentally met het in a café store when I was fooling around with my friends. We talked together three hours, but those three hours seemed not enough for her to tell her story which related to her life, her ex-husband. Dung, a gentle girl, was born in an educated family. Her parents were exemplary teachers. After she went to a big city, Ho Chi Minh City, to continue her dream in a university, she met Thuan, her ex-husband. Thuan had invited Dung many times to go out for a date, but Dung persisted to decline his invitation because she never thought that she would love Thuan, a man with a fierce face. Continuing the pursuit target almost four years, Thuan’s love was not still reciprocated. One day, Thuan came to find Dung at old her apartment. He said that the doctor had confirmed Thuan was incapable of having children with any women. He was depressed and cried in front of Dung. He begged Dung to accept him. In a pity minute, Dung devoted her life to Thuan. Day by day, Dung’s stomach became bigger. Buttons on her shirts wanted to unwind because the baby in her stomach growing up. Dung has lost connection with Thuan since that day. According to some friends, Thuan loved another girl, a rich merchant’s daughter in his village. Thuan’s parents also wanted him to get married to that girl. Groping Thuan’s address, which a friend gave, Dung came to Thuan’s house. Ignoring mercilessly, Thuan said:” I lied to you. The capable of none having children never happen to me.” He laughed sarcastically. Then, he continued” I just want to revenge time when I tried many ways to have your heart, but you refused my love. Now, you will pay price for what behaved to me. Get out of my place!” He irritated and shoved Dung fall down on the floor. As a result, Dung had miscarriage.
Whatever women or men revenge, the consequence of this only hurt them and hurt others. Therefore, we should let our hatred go away to have a happy life.