Thursday, January 27, 2011

ESL 096- Behind an ugly mole

“Uncle!”
I bowed before a strange man. He was only older than me five or six ages, something like that. But he looked like the mid-forty uncle; especially if I didn’t tighten my grip on the fence’s surface, an accident would happen to me due to that big black mole on his face. A long strand of hair stuck out from that mole.
I wondered why the strange man appeared in my house. Who was he??? A thousand of questions skipped in my mind. I muttered to myself and stared at him.
My sister approached us with enigmatic smile. She said to me, “This is a man who our uncle and aunt wanted to introduce to you. You’re going to get married to him.”
“What? This uncle….. Me….eeeeeee??????????”, I gaped.
“How this can be? Maybe, there was a mistake. I am only grade 12, how can I get married to him. How can I accept the man with a horrible mole?” I thought and cried loudly as if I was a child.
My sister laughed at me. She said that the man would be my brother-in-law in the future. He was a structural engineer. According to my uncle and my aunt, he graduated from a popular university in Ho Chi Minh City. But whoever he was, engineer or Viet Nam’s president, or whatever he could be, I didn’t want to accept the ugly old man with that mole who would get married to my sister.
Because of his first time visiting us, my aunt and my uncle invited him to have dinner. I was forced to go to my aunt’s house. I carefully looked his actions and my sister’s attitude. My sister smiled to him. Frustration and anger jumped out of my thorax. I decided to leave my aunt’s house although my sister tried to persuade me to stay there until the party had done. I ignored and walked to my house. Three kilometers to go back home that day became further, further…
He knew I hated him, but he didn’t be angry at me. He treated me as his little sister. Day by day, I gradually forgot his big black mole. I realized that good characteristics were hidden behind that ugly mole.

4 comments:

  1. We shouldn't judge somebody by appearance.It's intetesting to read your narrative.Full of details ,the essay is vivid.

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  2. It takes me three times to read to understand what you have written.lol

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  3. ahahah that was a quite surprise, wasn't it? But I agree that great personality is being hidden deep inside; it takes a while to get to know people.

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  4. We should not use a person's appearance to comment on him, and he may be a good choice.

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